Drabble!

[illwynd]

Title: Proof
Author: illwynd
Disclaimer: Not mine, no matter how much I wish they were.
Rating: PG-ish?
Characters/pairing: Boromir and Faramir. But is it slash? I dunno! Take your choice!
Notes: Feedback always welcome.
x-posted to ithilien_night, gondorcest and tolkien100


Boromir’s hair is soft against Faramir’s lips, and he breathes in his scent. His brother’s body against him is warm. His knees are hooked over Boromir’s arms, and he clings tightly to him. In the darkness of closed eyes, he knows nothing but him. The motion is not jarring, but lulling. Boromir whispers to him and the words hum through his form. This is comfort, a world of only them together. They could stay this way eternally.

But all pig-a-back rides must end, even when they are given to prove that little brothers can still be carried, even at 13.

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It greatly amused me last night when I was writing it, but, hmm, well... *shrugs*

Comments

[caras-galadhon.livejournal.com]

Aw, that's adorable, and what a great turn! Heh. I knew I should be expecting something different than the scenario my brain immediately jumped to, but I didn't anticipate the actual moment. *G* So sweet.

[lilan14.livejournal.com]

OMG!!!

Illwynd, you should never play such tricks on people, especially non-slashers!!! *grins so widely that her face hurts*

I used to carry my brother is this same way - while I still could *g* No incest, I assure you!

[just-ann-now.livejournal.com]

Wow!

You've perfectly captured the moment, as Faramir is poised to move unconsciously from carefree, childish games to the first stirrings of adult desires. Well done!

[txorakeriak.livejournal.com]

OMG. I feel like a complete perv now. *lol*
Loved this. Very intense. Even though it was just a pig-a-back ride and not what I thought. Ah well - just grow up, Faramir, then we'll see... ;)

[edoraslass.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's just so sweet! The lovely boys...

Faramir'll hit a growth spurt in the next year, and then no more piggy back rides. *sniff*

[b-briarwood.livejournal.com]

Ah-hahaha, I thought- well, I'm sure you know what I thought.
'M such a perv.

[gondorbunny.livejournal.com]

Hee hee hee. That is wonderful. A very unexpected twist!

[faramir-boromir.livejournal.com]

Damn! Damndamndamn! *pervs all over you*

[randi2204]

. . .

*huge grin* Yeah, my mind is so in the gutter. This was, in retrospect, very sweet! *sigh* Oh, so much love for the brothers. Lovely work, m'dear! I very much enjoyed!

And just you wait, Faramir . . . Boromir's got a wonderful surprise for you in a few years time. :D

[numenora.livejournal.com]

Joining the 'Gutter' gang--that hair-smelling thing may be innocent now, but just wait! Nice drabble. Patty.