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illwynd ([personal profile] illwynd) wrote2009-10-31 02:23 am

Six Days of Spooky

Some New Terror
Disclaimer: All Tolkien's!
Rating: PG
Summary: Under the eaves of Mirkwood, a new terror appears.
X-posted to [livejournal.com profile] spooky_arda

The sound of weeping—sobs and sighing breaths broken by high soft keening—emanated from the cluster of small furtive dwellings among the dark trees. Those who lived in this place now huddled behind bolted doors and shuttered windows, beset by grief and fear. These were not strangers to folk here, under the very eaves of Mirkwood where twilight lingered and shadows crept, but now some new terror lurked, bringing new grief.

Behind the walls of one rough, simple house, a small body lay wrapped in a bare cloth. The child’s mother sat, weak and empty, face tear-streaked, beside the small bed. There, that morning, the child had been found. Its throat had been torn and gnawed, but little blood had dripped to the bedclothes.

This death had come only days after another. A child of only a few months of age had been stolen from the cradle by night, and nothing had been found of it since.

Several of the men had gone into the forest then, seeking for the murderer. They had found strange signs; birds that screamed as they passed, as if maddened, and small beasts that seemed to wander lost all about their nests and burrows. The broken shells of eggs were found below the branches, and bits of fur and sinew clung to the bark of one hoary tree.

But no glimpse of the new terror that haunted Mirkwood did they see, but for a brief dark flash that might have been no more than a squirrel.
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2009-10-31 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes! This is the side of Gollum that is not remembered often enough in fanfic: a cannibal and a murderer and a thief. True, he was a figure of pity at the end, but he had never shown any pity to anyone himself. *shudder* Good job!

[identity profile] anthean.livejournal.com 2009-10-31 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, this was always the creepiest part of the books for me. Good job!

[identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com 2009-11-01 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, Gollum was not very nice, really, was he? Glad you liked this, and thanks for reading!

[identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com 2009-11-01 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that was definitely a creepy part! Glad you liked this!

[identity profile] sealover-astara.livejournal.com 2009-11-02 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't decide if this piece is more on the nasty or on the spooky side... ;)

[identity profile] actourdreams.livejournal.com 2009-11-03 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man, excellent stuff. I always love pieces from the point of view of the "ordinary people" of a world, and you elaborated wonderfully on that bit of the books.

[identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com 2009-11-03 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Heeh, yeah, I suppose it could go either way with that!

[identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com 2009-11-03 06:21 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I like that sort of thing too, and there's surely plenty of hazy corners to fill in, in Tolkien. Glad you enjoyed this! And ooh, G'Kar icon! :D

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2009-11-05 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. This was very nicely done. I had completely forgotten the details of Gollum's other, er, "adventures," and this brings it right home. Wow.

[identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com 2009-11-06 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Yeah, Tolkien makes it easy to pity him... and easy to forget that he was really a nasty piece of work. Glad you liked!