illwynd: (Spooky rider)
illwynd ([personal profile] illwynd) wrote2007-10-28 03:14 pm

Six Days of Spooky: Day 3

Yet another drabble for the Six Days of Spooky!

Fell Mission
By illwynd
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Rating: G
Summary: The Enemy has many servants. But not all of them are particularly effective.
x-posted to [livejournal.com profile] tolkien100

A dark cloud appeared, like a breath of corruption, exuding dread: they had hearts black as their wings, and spoke to one another of their fell mission…

“So, what are we supposed to be doing?”
“You asked that five minutes ago!”
“Would you two stop bickering? I can hardly hear myself thinking.”
“Because you ain’t!”
“Grah! If all of you don’t pipe down…”
“Who put you in charge, you ninny?”
“Shut up and start looking!”

Far below, a raven watched the gang of crebain flying madly past, glanced at the people huddled in the bushes, and cawed softly in disdain.

[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com 2007-10-29 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
*snerk* That's fantastic! What a take on the crebain! *giggles madly* Ineffective indeed.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
This was eminently giggleworthy. *applauds, giggling*

[identity profile] lilan14.livejournal.com 2007-11-03 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! You're going to make me fond of crebain if you go on like this, you know...

Great drabble!

[identity profile] roh-wyn.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
*snort*

Who put you in charge, you ninny?

Ok, maybe snorting reviews weren't quite what you were going for, but I thought this was hilarious!

[identity profile] edoraslass.livejournal.com 2007-11-15 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Heeeeeeeeeeeeee. Evil squabbling amongst itself! "We should've turn left back there!" The world's worst roadtrip. :)

re: Six Days of Spooky: Day 3: Fell Mission

[identity profile] lanthirel.livejournal.com 2008-03-24 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course the raven would be disdainful. LOL! Good dialogue.
Edited 2008-03-24 21:51 (UTC)