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Yet another drabble for the Six Days of Spooky!

Fell Mission
By illwynd
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Rating: G
Summary: The Enemy has many servants. But not all of them are particularly effective.
x-posted to [livejournal.com profile] tolkien100

A dark cloud appeared, like a breath of corruption, exuding dread: they had hearts black as their wings, and spoke to one another of their fell mission…

“So, what are we supposed to be doing?”
“You asked that five minutes ago!”
“Would you two stop bickering? I can hardly hear myself thinking.”
“Because you ain’t!”
“Grah! If all of you don’t pipe down…”
“Who put you in charge, you ninny?”
“Shut up and start looking!”

Far below, a raven watched the gang of crebain flying madly past, glanced at the people huddled in the bushes, and cawed softly in disdain.

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Date: 2007-10-29 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
*snerk* That's fantastic! What a take on the crebain! *giggles madly* Ineffective indeed.

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Date: 2007-10-29 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
If crebain are anything like ordinary crows, I can see stuff like that happening left and right. :p Thanks, and I'm pleased that you found this giggle-worthy!

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Date: 2007-10-31 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
This was eminently giggleworthy. *applauds, giggling*

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Date: 2007-10-31 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Yay, thanks! Glad you thought so. ^_^

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Date: 2007-11-01 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Easily distracted crebain are the best kind, I think. ^_~ Thanks for the comment!

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Date: 2007-11-03 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilan14.livejournal.com
LOL! You're going to make me fond of crebain if you go on like this, you know...

Great drabble!

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Date: 2007-11-04 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Heeh, well, I couldn't think of any other explanation for their inability to spot nine people wandering in a relatively open place... :p

Glad you liked! ^_^

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Date: 2007-11-04 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roh-wyn.livejournal.com
*snort*

Who put you in charge, you ninny?

Ok, maybe snorting reviews weren't quite what you were going for, but I thought this was hilarious!

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Date: 2007-11-04 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Oh, snorting reviews are just fine! I'm glad to make you snort! :p

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Date: 2007-11-15 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edoraslass.livejournal.com
Heeeeeeeeeeeeee. Evil squabbling amongst itself! "We should've turn left back there!" The world's worst roadtrip. :)

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Date: 2007-11-16 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Evil seems to squabble a lot in LotR. Must be something in the water. ^_~

The world's worst roadtrip.
Heeh! Indeed. Glad you liked this!

re: Six Days of Spooky: Day 3: Fell Mission

Date: 2008-03-24 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanthirel.livejournal.com
Of course the raven would be disdainful. LOL! Good dialogue.
Edited Date: 2008-03-24 09:51 pm (UTC)

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