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Happy Halloween everyone! Hope you're having a great Spookyday!

Transformation
Author: illwynd
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: One way to make an Orc.
Notes: Written for the Halloween Drabble Masquerade at BoG.

He was alone. Terrible things had been done to him, but he had ceased to mind the pain. Only this terrified him: his memories had slowly eroded to darkness, until he didn’t know what he had forgotten.

His own hand moved upward and touched his face like a stranger’s.

A bowl of water had been shoved under the door. It sloshed over onto the dirt floor before shivering to stillness. As he reached for it, torchlight shone through the cracks in his prison.

His fingernails, broken like glass, left red trails along his skin.

It had been a mirror in the gloom, showing him a mangled thing. He had spilled all the water in his horror. He wished he had not seen it, for now he could no longer remember what he used to look like.

He scratched at the skin that was not his own. Somehow it had grown over his face like mold. He tore open the boils and scraped at the scabs.

It was no use. The face was his now.

Dark blood dripped in his eyes, down his cheeks, into his lolling mouth. He shuddered.

Its mouth drank his fear, and swallowed it down like bitterness.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-11-01 01:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-branwyn.livejournal.com
Aieeeeiiieee!
(Very effective drabble.)

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Date: 2006-11-01 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad to hear it worked for you! >:D

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Date: 2006-11-01 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sealover-astara.livejournal.com
That one is really creepy! (And good.)

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Date: 2006-11-02 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Thanks! Creepy was what I was going for. :p

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Date: 2006-11-03 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edoraslass.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeek! Wow, that's just kinda vicious, perhaps even more because for no real reason I can explain, I was thinking of a Boromir who didn't die at Amon Hen, but got taken captive by the Orcs. *cries*

It's probably [livejournal.com profile] adraefan's fault, though.

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Date: 2006-11-04 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Heeh, I kinda creeped myself out writing this one... and if I had been thinking of that, gosh... I'd probably still be huddled in a corner. ^_~

re: Seven Days of Spooky: day 7

Date: 2006-11-17 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanthirel.livejournal.com
Eeek! Indeed, a very scary insight. Will read the rest later. In the meantime, am friending you so that I don't lose track of your writing. Having discovered you via [livejournal.com profile] tolkien100, I wanted to read more. :) And you're welcome to friend me back. My LJ is mostly Tolkien-oriented, and I post a lot or none at all. :) I write drabbles and some poems and some meta from time to time.

Re: Seven Days of Spooky: day 7

Date: 2006-11-17 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanthirel.livejournal.com
One question: what's BoG?

And my LJ is friends-only, btw.

Re: Seven Days of Spooky: day 7

Date: 2006-11-17 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
BoG is a very wonderful board that I frequent. It's for people who like Boromir, Faramir, Denethor, or Gondorians in general. ^_^

Re: Seven Days of Spooky: day 7

Date: 2006-11-17 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Thanks for the fb!

My LJ is mostly Tolkien-oriented, and I post a lot or none at all.
Heeh, mine's pretty much the same way. :p Just friended ya!

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Date: 2006-12-14 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomear.livejournal.com
very awesome, it ah...made my skin crawl cause i was picturing it in my head.

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Date: 2006-12-16 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Heeh, thanks... I kinda creeped myself out writing it, too. :P

re: Transformation

Date: 2007-09-22 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanthirel.livejournal.com
Good writing, but so distressing to read. Sauron and Morgoth have a lot to answer for, corrupting the elves in this fashion.

Re: Transformation

Date: 2007-09-22 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanthirel.livejournal.com
*headdesk* Looked back in the comments and saw that I had already commented. *laughs at self* Hmm, I need a headdesky Lotr or fantasy-related icon.

Re: Transformation

Date: 2007-09-22 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Heeh, oh well, right? I'm certainly not gonna complain! :p

Re: Transformation

Date: 2007-09-22 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illwynd.livejournal.com
Sauron and Morgoth have a lot to answer for
Too true!

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